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The big dream chapter one
THE BIG DREAM…
Purpose: we are making a narrative, So to entertain the audience.
WALT:plan a narrative by using a simple structure.
Jade is a dreamer, she loves to dream dreams but the problem with Jade is… she has so much dreams she doesn’t know when she is dreaming or when she is in the real world, wide awake. But one day Jade asks Nomai, Juls, Jose and Jessie to sleep over at her house. Ten minutes after her friends had arrived at her house, Jade falls off to sleep. {This is in her dream} Jade wakes up and yawns “ ahhhhh” and jumps out of her bed. She walks into the bathroom and turns on the cold tap to wash her hands, ‘shhh,’ the tap water froze “Ahhh how did that happen? Why? Aye????” Jade scratches her head in confusion. “What’s going on?” Then Jade goes for a walk around the house. Jade walks into the sitting room and sees Jessie, Nomai, Jose and Juls. Jessie is lifting up the couch with her massive as muscle. However Nomai is sitting on top reaching and stretching her body for three metres for the chips and the fizzies in the fridge and kitchen pantry. Jose is in the kitchen heating up her coffee with red lasers beaming out of her eyes. Juls is running around the house fast as lightening her legs were super speedy. Looking around, the house was a complete shambles. Drawers were tipped over. Food was scattered all over the ground. Couches, chairs, tables were upside down.
Purpose: we are making a narrative, So to entertain the audience.
WALT:plan a narrative by using a simple structure.
Jade is a dreamer, she loves to dream dreams but the problem with Jade is… she has so much dreams she doesn’t know when she is dreaming or when she is in the real world, wide awake. But one day Jade asks Nomai, Juls, Jose and Jessie to sleep over at her house. Ten minutes after her friends had arrived at her house, Jade falls off to sleep. {This is in her dream} Jade wakes up and yawns “ ahhhhh” and jumps out of her bed. She walks into the bathroom and turns on the cold tap to wash her hands, ‘shhh,’ the tap water froze “Ahhh how did that happen? Why? Aye????” Jade scratches her head in confusion. “What’s going on?” Then Jade goes for a walk around the house. Jade walks into the sitting room and sees Jessie, Nomai, Jose and Juls. Jessie is lifting up the couch with her massive as muscle. However Nomai is sitting on top reaching and stretching her body for three metres for the chips and the fizzies in the fridge and kitchen pantry. Jose is in the kitchen heating up her coffee with red lasers beaming out of her eyes. Juls is running around the house fast as lightening her legs were super speedy. Looking around, the house was a complete shambles. Drawers were tipped over. Food was scattered all over the ground. Couches, chairs, tables were upside down.
The big dream chapter two
“OMG...look at my house” Jade shrieked. “Hey! Hey! What are you all doing here? AND why the heck do you we have super powers? Do you know that I just froze the tap water in the Bathroom?”
Nomai begins to explain, “well….for starters we’re all here because you invited us to your house for a sleepover so we could celebrate our birthdays together and in style. Two, we all have super powers because apparently when we turn 16 our powers appear. I’m pretty sure my powers allow me to stretch my limbs however long they’re needed. I can stretch to where ever I like without moving. It’s pretty sick!”
Jose pokes her head through the kitchen door. “My power’s let me heat up coffee. I’m certain these laser beams (pointing to her eyes) will pretty much fry you to pieces,” she smirks.
Jessie pipes up, “I’m super strong, I can lift up whatever I want with my little finger. I’ve lifted the drawers, couches, t.v….I reckon I could lift the fridge too,”
“Yeah I can see that!” Jade says glaring at her messy lounge.
“I think I’m going to try and lift the car, maybe I should try the house?” says Jessie who starts lifting everything in sight.
Out of nowhere, Juls comes to a screaming halt. “My power as you can probably guess is super fast speed. I reckon I could run the length of the country in five minutes flat.”
Nomai added smiling to Jade “In answer to your last statement Jade, I’m thinking your power is ice or the ability to freeze objects. You're what’s known as an iccer. You can ice anything you want, with your mouth and hands.”
“Wait up, I have powers?” (walking around in circles panicking) “I have powers? Ohhh I have powers. What am I going to do? (starting to calm down) OK… wait its good to have powers, really good haa hoo haa hoo” Jade panics, breathing in and out. “Ok I’ve finished panicking. So all of us have powers? Me, you, Jose, Jessie and Juls, we all have different powers?” Jade asked Nomai.
“Yep” Nomai replied. “Now let’s play around with our powers. Are you OK with this Jade???” Nomai asked.
“Yes I’m OK with this,” Jade replied. “Let’s go and have fun.”
The big dream chapter three
The girls started have too much fun with their powers without realising the main rule of powers which is ‘Safety First.’
Then BOOM! POW! There were mini tornados flying around the house and water overflowing everywhere. Jade and all her friends didn’t know what to do.
“AHHHH! What's happening? Whats going on? How did this happen? What do we do?” Jade panicked.
“Let’s escape now before we all die!” Jessie yelled. All the girls ran out of the front door and they all jump on Juls back, arms and legs. Juls boosted it all the way to the middle of town and then stopped.
“Where should we go? We have no where to go” Jade asked.
“I know we must go to Maori Te Ari,” Jessie mentioned.
“Who’s Maori Te Ari? I’m guessing it’s Te Ari Jack, who’s in our class,” Jade said
“Yep,” Jessie replied.
“Is there anyone else I don’t know who has super powers?” Jade asked.
“No.” Jessie said. So Juls took all the girls on a journey to Maori Te Ari’s house.
The big dream chapter four
Knock... knock... knock... “Who’s there?” Maori Te Ari asks.
“It’s me, Jessie, and I brought Jade, Jose, Juls and Nomai,”
“Oh, ok,” Maori Te Ari opened the door and then asked “What do you want?”
“We sort of like made a humongous mess with our powers and we don’t know how to fix it,” Jessie said.
“Oh no, so I’m guessing that you want me to help you clean up all of your mess, you guys have made, using my Maori wizard powers. Is that right?” Maori Te Ari moaned
“Yep pretty much,” Jessie replied.
“Ok,” said Maori Te Ari.
Maori Te Ari searches through all of his stuff trying to find ‘out of hand’ spells and still doesn’t find any thing but then...
He finds a spell for cleaning up but they needed five ingredients. First ingredient was a red ruby representing heat ray. Second ingredient was a white diamond representing ice. Third ingredient was an elm branch representing strength. Forth ingredient was a lightning bolt representing super fast movement. The last ingredient was a piece of magical bubblegum that represents stretchy. So the girls and Maori Te Ari and went to search for all five ingredients.
The big dream chapter five
“Ok guys we will go to the Forest of Rubies, to find the first ingredient, a red ruby,” Jose said. So they took off to the Forest of Rubies to find the red ruby.
The girls arrived at the forest. “Wow look at all these rubies its going to take days to find a red ruby because I only see blue, green, pink and purple rubies. Oh theres a red one.” Jose said
“Well grab it!” Maori Te Ari screamed. Jose ran to the red ruby and grabbed it. But then a creepy mythical monster ran out.
“Ahhhh what's that?” Jose yelled in terrified voice.
“Its called a terri firectict lizzie” Maori Te Ari said. “They’re deadly animals so if I was you, I would run,” Maori Te Ari screamed and they all boosted it on Juls back and with the red ruby in hand.
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