Wednesday, 30 July 2014

Fractured Fairytale

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In a farm, far, far away, there lived a very poor girl called Jade who lived with her mother. Jade had brown long hair, brown eyes and she always had overalls on. They lived in a little cottage that could only fit two people in it. Jade and her mother were so poor they only have enough money to have one meal a day.

Then one day Jade decided to explore. Jade went for a walk down the hill and over a mountain, through some mud until she found a rock, a very sparkly rock. She found three of them and she picked them up and took them home.

Jade sat in the garden with them and said in a wondering voice, “What are these? Are they rocks? Are they mud clumps? Are they sand clumps? Why are they sparkly?”

Then her mother came out “Jade what are you doing?”

“I’m studying “ she replied

“Well come inside soon and have a kai it’s mutton tonight” Jade mother said in a worried voice. So Jade went inside for a kai and left the rocks out in the garden.

But what she didn’t know was when she got up the mud off her feet flipped onto the rocks and bereed them. While Jade and her mother were having a kai it started to rain and rain and rain and rain Jade forgot all about the rocks and went straight to bed then in the morning it happened

“Jade come out here right now what is the meaning of this” Jade's mother screamed in anger “ what… WOW its a seed well was a seed but now its a big humungousaur crystal ummm tall thing” jade yelled “ so you know what this is” Jade's mother said “ ummm” jade went quiet then her mother went inside and yelled “ Jade clean this up you are grounded.” “oh man” Jade replied in an annoyed voice.But then she had an idea.

She climbed up the crystal stork and it led to a big shed in the clouds and then there was a money bunny it was a bunny that pooped out money so if you asked  for some money as much as you want it will give it to you. So Jade grabbed the money bunny and climbed down the stork.

And then she heard a very loud noise “What's that enormous noise” “FEE FI FO FUM WHERE IS MY BUNNY” “ its a giant” Jade Yelled She rushed down the stork as fast as a lightning bolt The giant heard her and follow “ GIVE MY BUNNY BACK NOW OR ELSE ILL EAT YOU” But Jade kept running. Then the giant got really angry and started to break stuff and try to throw it at Jade. But Jade keep dodging the broking things and kept running down the stork she got home and run to her mum “ what are you doing Jade” Her mum said “ and why do you have a bunny “ Sorry mum but I'm getting chased” Jade said in worry “by what” her mum said “ A GIANT”. “kids and their imagination” Jades mum said in a laughter voice. “ ahhh a giant you were right jade you're so grounded” her mum said in a terrified voice.

Jade sprinted into to her room and sat underneath the sheep fur and the giant riped of there roof and grabed Jade “give my bunny back now.” The giant said in a scary voice. “ why do you want it so badly we need it more then you where poor, please can we keep it please.” Jade beged the giant “ but its my only friend i have no one” the giant started to feel sad and he droped to the ground. “well you can stay here if you want and ill be your friend or i could come visit you up at your home every day because we really need this bunny poor as we have nothing.” Jade said to the giant “ you’ll really do that” the giant responded “ yeah any time” “ok its a deal.” And the giant climbed back up the stork and left the bunny with Jade and her mum.

Jade and her mum ended up with a big as kingdom for them self and always had a different type of dinner and breakfast and lunch and were never poor again. For the giant he was famous because Jade told all of her friends about him and the giant was never ever lonely.

                                            The End

4 comments:

  1. Hi Jade, your version of Jack and the beanstalk is a cool version, but some of your spelling is wrong, but otherwise a great story.

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  2. Hi Jade wow what an awesome story

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  3. Hey Jade I like your story, really entertaining.

    Keep it up!

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  4. This is a really cooland long story
    keep it up!

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