Friday, 19 September 2014

The big dream chapter nine.

Knowing that they had collected all five magical ingredients, the girls and Maori TeAri jumped back onto Juls back and they took off back to Maori Te Aris house. “Now what do we do?” Jade asked. “We have to mix it all together and put it in this cauldron. So whats the first ingredient??” Maori Te Ari asked. “It was the red ruby,” Jose replied. “What was the second ingredient??” Maori Te Ari asked. “It was the white diamond,” Jade replied. “What was the third ingredient??” Maori Te Ari said. “It was this elm branch, ” Jessie replied. “What was the fourth ingredient??” Maori Te Ari asked. “It was a lightning bolt,” Juls replied. “And what was the last ingredient??” Maori Te Ari asked. “It was a magical piece of gum,” Nomai replied. “Everybody watch,” Maori Te Ari said. “Come and see how it all mixes up”. The girls gathered around the cauldron they saw smoke and twinkles coming out. “Wow,” Jade sighed. “Now all I need is to put this potion into my wand and go to your house. Jade grab my wand for me please.” stated Maori Te Ari. Maori Te Ari put the potion mixture inside the wand and they all traveled to Jade’s house. “Ok everyone step back. I need to work my magic.” He wove his wand around in the air ran and all around the house and yelled, “ ABRACADABRA!!!” And ‘poof!’ everything went back to normal. The mini tornadoes stopped, the water disappeared and everything was just so beautiful, spic and span. From now on, Jade and her friends learnt to use their powers more carefully by having fun with them and also knowing how to keep safe. They never massed another house again. [Yawning] “hoooo” Jade woke up from her dream and could see all her friends sitting around in the room. “Morning sleepy head, you’ve been asleep for a whole hour,” Nomai said “Oh, I had the most amazing dream. You were all there. you, and you (pointing her fingers around the room) actually all of you guys were there in my dream and so was Te Ari,” Jade said to her friends. “ We all had powers and…..” Jade began to tell her friends about her dream. It was the best sleep-over story they girls had ever heard and they had an awesome night. The End.
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  1. Aunty Nat13 November 2014 at 22:00

    Hi Jade,
    Wow what a great story this was, when you become a famous authoress like you dream to remember your Aunty Nat and cousin Sage. You have such an amazing imagination and you drew me into the story so much so that I couldn't wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next. In fact I was a little disappointed that it had to end. This kind of story reminds me of books that I have read in the past and couldn't wait till the next edition came out. I love how you have used descriptive words and expression throughout your story all the while I can still hear you and your beautiful down to earth character in your words as well. I can't wait to read more xx.

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