Friday, 19 September 2014

The big dream chapter one

THE BIG DREAM…
 Purpose: we are making a narrative, So to entertain the audience.
WALT:plan a narrative by using a simple structure.

Jade is a dreamer, she loves to dream dreams but the problem with Jade is… she has so much dreams she doesn’t know when she is dreaming or when she is in the real world, wide awake. But one day Jade asks Nomai, Juls, Jose and Jessie to sleep over at her house. Ten minutes after her friends had arrived at her house, Jade falls off to sleep. {This is in her dream} Jade wakes up and yawns “ ahhhhh” and jumps out of her bed. She walks into the bathroom and turns on the cold tap to wash her hands, ‘shhh,’ the tap water froze “Ahhh how did that happen? Why? Aye????” Jade scratches her head in confusion. “What’s going on?” Then Jade goes for a walk around the house. Jade walks into the sitting room and sees Jessie, Nomai, Jose and Juls. Jessie is lifting up the couch with her massive as muscle. However Nomai is sitting on top reaching and stretching her body for three metres for the chips and the fizzies in the fridge and kitchen pantry. Jose is in the kitchen heating up her coffee with red lasers beaming out of her eyes. Juls is running around the house fast as lightening her legs were super speedy. Looking around, the house was a complete shambles. Drawers were tipped over. Food was scattered all over the ground. Couches, chairs, tables were upside down.

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