Levelling sheet

Element	Rubric	Comment
Ideas	6	Your ideas are good but I lose focus partly through But its still enough for a 6
Structure and Language	5	This is well arranged,  But some of the language could be change
Organisation	6	This is well organised
Vocabulary	6	You have used words that fit this piece of writing. Just some should be change to more interesting words like instead of said you can say announced or something
Sentence Structure	5	Your sentences are nicely split but some of them might need swapping and the words in some.
Punctuation	5	I don’t think there is not many to change this is good
Spelling	6	Your spelling is correct everything is